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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2004-11-04 09:55 AM



I feel it,
the disappointment
that always seams my body
runs from the neck
to the left shoulder
and down the arm
the one that supports me
in all I do

I feel it,
the quickened beats
that run throughout
the cold rain
keeping up
and the dark clouds
surrounding
the atmosphere ripe
for static

I push those thoughts around
until they swirl
becoming nonsensical
leaving me alone
but smiling
as I wonder why it is
I am always waiting
having promised myself
after years of such
that I wouldn't be left
waiting...
anymore


M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2004-11-04 10:45 AM


as I wonder why it is
I am always waiting
having promised myself
after years of such
that I wouldn't be left
waiting...
anymore


I too, know these type of days. Hugs.

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
2 posted 2004-11-04 10:49 AM


Is it as dreary there as it is here today?

hugs and thanks
M

Gentle Spirit
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3 posted 2004-11-04 10:59 AM


yep, rainy cold and dreary....lol...
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state of mind
4 posted 2004-11-04 11:01 AM


a chilli night here,
but sunny
but a big bowl would warm me up
good write
(((((M)))))

bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
5 posted 2004-11-04 02:55 PM


A good bowl of chili would  be perfect right now...thank you Bernie for stopping by

hugs
M

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