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HopeS
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0 posted 2004-11-02 03:37 PM



If I Was To Call You Today

If I was to call you today
Just where would I begin
With sweet loving kisses
Lips to caress you're skin

If I was to call you today
Feelings I would express
Sharing sensual intimacy
Within every loving caress

If I was to call you today
My lips would slowly trace
Whispering to you're ears
In each sensuous embrace

If I was to call you today
Sweetly I would softly say
Words innermost desires
In loves whispered foreplay


HopeĀ©2004

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DavePage
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1 posted 2004-11-02 03:45 PM


Hope

If you read this poem to me, I would need an insulated phone and the kitchen foam kit.

Very sensual, very direct, almost coming from the very, very Island before Barry Manilow launches into the next song.

Jokes aside, red hot words from (we must find another term - if you were male we would say Master, the femail term doesn't really fit appropriately here) you.

Dave

HopeS
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2 posted 2004-11-02 03:52 PM


Dave you replied with a master stroke LOL

Hope

LeeJ
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3 posted 2004-11-03 07:27 AM


Beautifully done...enjoyed!
Mark Bohannan
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4 posted 2004-11-03 08:16 AM


Now that is a phone call I would take even if it were collect.  Talk about reaching out and touching someone.  Very sensual and full of burning passion.  Definitely a treat to read this morning.
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
5 posted 2004-11-03 08:23 AM


HopeS
I'm not leaving the phone today.

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