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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2004-10-31 11:08 PM



Chained




Autumn brings certain flight of pheasant, prairie chicken, quail and hen
This is when deer run, coyote hunt, rabbits and squirrels mark their signs,
Even turkey are found on a run, in hail of some conquering heroes
From yesterday.

When life for life is required for survival, a need to feed families, just as all, and
Fowl took bite of crickets, ’hoppers, beetles, and such, raise the bar for carnivores,
All with families of their own.

I walk in the quiet, cringe at the hail of shot, knowing someone’s need,
Or, god help them, those that sport only with blood lust.

We do not always look that far; for some of us, we are only part

Of life’s circle
And chain.


© Copyright 2004 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2004-11-01 08:28 AM


Sunshine
I agree, wasting life is the saddest of sad.

LeeJ
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2 posted 2004-11-01 08:38 AM


tremendous write and reminder to flow eventide...

What a visual you have conjured up here with your words of magic....

You are a wonder!

Very much enjoyed this

Hope you had a great weekend, and a happy Halloween


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Canada eh.
3 posted 2004-11-01 08:48 AM


Different format for you Karilea..
But I like it very much..very much indeed.
Well done.

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

MGROVES
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4 posted 2004-11-01 09:23 AM


very good, agree


babygirlwlove
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5 posted 2004-11-01 09:48 AM


this flooded me with autumn colors...even before I saw the pic....niiiiice..

**babygirL**

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displaced
6 posted 2004-11-01 09:33 PM


beautiful
Mark Bohannan
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7 posted 2004-11-03 08:19 AM


good words ... good poem.  Enjoyed
scorpio
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right...there
8 posted 2004-11-03 08:45 AM


Enjoyed this Karilea.

believe in what your heart feels...

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