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November (CBE)

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Huan Yi
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0 posted 11-01-2004 06:25 AM       View Profile for Huan Yi   Email Huan Yi   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Huan Yi

slowly
slowly
another generation
is passing

goodbye
goodbye
young boys
and girls

flowers
of the forest
are closing their petals

another day falters
into the sea

© Copyright 2004 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
Dark Angel
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1 posted 11-01-2004 06:34 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

yes.... it does.

LeeJ
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2 posted 11-01-2004 08:45 AM       View Profile for LeeJ   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LeeJ

yup, another day faulters into the sea

enjoyed...
ParisGrl
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3 posted 11-01-2004 07:28 PM       View Profile for ParisGrl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ParisGrl

Loved it.

~Laura~
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nicely put
jwesley
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5 posted 11-01-2004 08:56 PM       View Profile for jwesley   Email jwesley   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jwesley

Loved the way you put this...much enjoyed the read.

jwesley
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6 posted 05-15-2007 12:24 AM       View Profile for Drauntz   Email Drauntz   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Drauntz

felt the CBE , four movements in total and different directions, and different colors.
 
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