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Michael G
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0 posted 2004-10-28 11:55 PM


theres a silence waiting for me
through the trees I feeling it surround me
theres a silence angling for me
though heaven can never do enough
the stars are dimming in my mind
they've fallen and have turned to dust
the moon is turning flight
away from its only home
amongst the traders of dreams I fall
only the sounds of screams I sense
for the price of pennies I collect
the last views of this world we've spent
theres a silence waiting for me
through the valleys of wind torn streets
theres a silence waiting for me
and nothing will ever remain.

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Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30
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1 posted 2004-10-29 04:39 AM


Interesting words here....

Thank you..

Goldenrose.

Janet Marie
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2 posted 2004-10-29 10:34 AM


theres a silence waiting for me
through the trees I feeling it surround me
theres a silence angling for me
though heaven can never do enough
the stars are dimming in my mind
they've fallen and have turned to dust
the moon is turning flight
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theres a silence waiting for me
through the valleys of wind torn streets
theres a silence waiting for me
and nothing will ever remain.
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your always impressive words will remain.
Hello there groovy guy
this is a bittersweet beauty poet of the wind...so good to read you again MG.

Poetry is emotion put into measure.
The emotion comes by nature ...
but the measure is acquired by art.

Thomas Hardy


Enchantress
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2004-10-29 10:35 AM


Very nicely done..very nice indeed.
Hugs~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

4 posted 2004-10-29 10:39 AM


Beautifully written!
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5 posted 2004-10-29 10:58 AM


Michael...you've moved!  
So good to see you again
here in the blue...
as good as you ever were!

passing shadows
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displaced
6 posted 2004-10-29 11:15 AM


kinda sad and beautiful
Jenn E
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7 posted 2004-10-29 02:59 PM


Astounding as always MG.......such a way with words.
Take Care
Jenn E

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