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Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

0 posted 2004-10-28 10:47 PM

She who has been waiting
for her lover
for desire of words
written on winds and sand

The arrival is certain
unfolding like a flower
in some lost graceful motion

Maybe the sky will keep you
from falling
having no say --
just walls
and skin &the smell
of tainted sheets

I didnt keep the details
but know they exist

{all in different shades of yellow lines
and finer roads}

I'd rather you kept the clutter
of rain in your mind
blue and empty
stuffed with false hope
and adoring means

~
Perhaps jaded
in your hands
until the light of morning
or the next flavor
settles upon your tongue

~~*~~
Read between the lines
look deep into each word
and you will understand the
depth of my soul (GE)
~~**~~

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2004-10-28 11:35 PM

ooooooooooh Lauren....
I love this one...

{found I was holding my breath while reading!}

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2004-10-28 11:44 PM

in some lost graceful motion

~*~

This line spoke to my inwardly...
and if you know me
you know
exactly what I mean...

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2004-10-29 12:36 PM

Lovely...James

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

4 posted 2004-10-29 05:49 AM

Excellent Lauren.

it's a

Maree

and I am haunted
by my illicit exquisite dream
but I can't really wake up
so I just drift in between

~ani difranco~

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

5 posted 2004-10-29 07:26 AM

Oh Lady...you ARE beauty...

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2004-10-29 07:57 AM

Lovely this...very special indeed.
Love ya lady~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

7 posted 2004-10-29 08:10 AM

Lauren, this was tremendous, and now you've given me chills
Geeze Lousie, what a write

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

8 posted 2004-10-29 10:20 AM

for desire of words
written on winds and sand

The arrival is certain
unfolding like a flower
in some lost graceful motion

Maybe the sky will keep you
from falling
having no say --
just walls
and skin &the smell
of tainted sheets

I didnt keep the details
but know they exist

{all in different shades of yellow lines
and finer roads}
=======================

so many times I find missing parts of me moody muse in your words...
only you turn them into something fragile, delicate and lovely.
Beautiful expressions in this gem L-girlie.

Poetry is emotion put into measure.
The emotion comes by nature ...
but the measure is acquired by art.

Thomas Hardy

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

9 posted 2004-10-29 01:10 PM

as usual.. you leave me withlittle to say..except beautiful..

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

10 posted 2004-10-29 06:34 PM

aww...

I forgot to click..

*click*

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

abbymatilda
Junior Member

since 2003-12-22

Posts 35

11 posted 2004-10-29 07:01 PM

Ummm, what can I say? You're hot! This poem is beautiful.
Abby

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