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ParisGrl
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0 posted 2004-10-27 01:15 PM


I don't know what to say or do when I'm around you
You make me see things different ways
I can't talk to you because what I want to say comes out not quite the right way
I get frustrated in not being able to find the right words
I just want to tell you that I will bring you through this darkness you are going through
Take my hand, its ok.....I know I certainly have never felt this way.

(edited profanity)Guys, I need help.....there is a man who i am absolutely in love with......he knows this too. When we see each other I get all tongue tied and don't know what to say him.  All of our conversations revolve around school, work, weather,etc.  Problem is I want to very badly tell him how i feel....and I can't because i'm to scared he'll say no.  Any suggestions of conversation starters would be much appreciated.(edited profanity)

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (10-27-2004 01:59 PM).]

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Ericc
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since 2003-01-31
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1 posted 2004-10-27 02:51 PM


Read him your beautiful words...

Eric

DavePage
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since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917

2 posted 2004-10-28 03:52 PM


Decide how much you want him.

If you want him enough get a Card printed saying "I'm interested in you but it is too intrusive when I try to talk to you as I want to".

Remember that passion has a "put a stone in the jar for every time in the first 9 months, and take one out every time after that and you may never reach the bottom of the jar.

Walk up to him and give him the card and possibly some form of prevention of accidents and walk away.

Take very special care

Dave


Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688
Waukegan
3 posted 2004-10-31 01:08 AM


I don't know what to say
or do when I'm around you

You make me see things
in different ways

I can't talk to you
because what I want to say
comes out not quite the way
I want it to

Frustrated
not able to find the right words

I just want to tell you
I will bring you through
this darkness

Take my hand
.............................

A thought

John

P.S.  Be very very careful.

Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
4 posted 2004-11-15 02:42 PM


Laura,

A man huh?? I wish you the best of luck with that one girlie. Hope it works out for ya.

Take care
Amy

"When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter"

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

5 posted 2004-11-15 03:11 PM


be patient, when the time is right, you'll know it....
When I was in school I had a friend like this and I thought I loved him so very much, and I did....but in our senior year, he asked me out...the date was nice...but we both decided that we'd rather not risk loosing a long friendship and complicate it with delussions of true love....we were friends but had nothing in common...

Thank goodness we listened to our minds and not our hearts...some 35 years later, we are still very close friends, but could never be anything more...but there is a spiritual respect in this, which is so rewarding...and good.  

Anyway, if your patient enough, you will know what to do and/or say, and it will be the right time and place.

Love and hugs to you

stevebrklynnyc
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since 2004-01-04
Posts 292
GA, Camden
6 posted 2004-11-15 03:54 PM


If it's meant to be, it will happen.  Go slow, take it day by day.  In the end it will all be worth it.  Steve.
ParisGrl
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since 2000-06-01
Posts 610

7 posted 2004-11-15 10:37 PM


To everyone who replied, I'm sorry but I don't have time to respond to each of you.  Thank you for your kind words.

Amy,

yeah girlie,  its a guy. I thought I told you about him once.  Anyhow, its great to see you around again.  

~Laura~

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
8 posted 2004-11-15 11:40 PM


Not much you can do if he's not interested in you, if he is, rest assured he will give you the time you need to develop a friendship and perhaps more...James
ParisGrl
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since 2000-06-01
Posts 610

9 posted 2004-11-17 12:21 PM


James,

I found out through a trusted friend that he is interested in me.  I know I should probably make the first move but I'm to darn nervous.  Thank you for your reply.

~Laura~

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