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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2004-11-17 08:22 AM


have you been a bad girl
with your secrets sometimes
did you peek in this window
and tell her to come see too

have you told her about the lines
and how to read between them here
did you both giggle
and put your hands over your mouths

does she know about the other room
the one with the locks on
where you are bad sometimes
do you wish you could tell her

how you have been playing
and talking to strangers
and how you carry their picture
in your cellophane frame

do you want to show it to her
and hear her say you are lucky
and that she wishes she were you
so she could be naughty too

if you want to it is ok, what say you
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[This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (11-17-2004 09:08 AM).]

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Catrina
Member
since 2004-11-10
Posts 132

1 posted 2004-11-17 09:04 AM



Girls...
even ladies,
will giggle
when the right moment
strikes their fancy...

and you seem to light
a lot of giggles...
and sighs.

Say I.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
2 posted 2004-11-17 09:08 AM


Ah, you caught me.
I have the lock
for the other room.
I have been there
to peek and giggle.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
3 posted 2004-11-17 09:09 AM


ms Cat' nah...is all imagination...say I, thank you for your hi eye


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ms E..big smile here..it is ok...here let me open the door for you, thanks lady

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

4 posted 2004-11-17 09:11 AM


have you told her about the lines
and how to read between them here
did you both giggle
and put your hands over your mouths

yeah, and boy did we giggle.....

hehhe....
your fun is showing
Chess?

Hugs and thank you for your perception

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

5 posted 2004-11-17 10:09 AM


now I have that song by the same name stuck in my head...lol..and its one of my favorite songs!

You know what I would say D.
Hugs.

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
6 posted 2004-11-17 10:47 AM


just grooving on your mind theatre badboy
tell me:
how can i go from understudy to starring role?

Susan
Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
7 posted 2004-11-17 11:55 AM


Smiling here D- your lines would definitely be worth sharing - to wear them as one would a designer dress - to dance and strut and feel lovely in them -

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
8 posted 2004-11-17 12:16 PM


ms lee j
thanks to you my friend


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ms gs...mmmmmmm sounds so suggestive...thank you lady


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ms inkysin...just sit close and pretend
thank you for your eyes ms
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ms susan, come dance then, know my arms if you wish, what say you.  thank you for your eyes


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