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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2004-10-27 08:05 AM


harvester of the rhyme
reaper of the poet soul
does your gown make music
when it is the rain on stone

write of me in your journal
draw my wings in cage of ink
with no doors for my demon
didn't I tell you then

that dragons never die
but rise on their own third day
as the shadows of dreams
when their saliva is sleep slick

and their breath is memory
know me now in your mind eye
as the shimmer shape on glass
I am the hand that draws the lines

at the edge of your woman's eyes
___________
Dark

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Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348
Florida
1 posted 2004-10-27 08:34 AM


I know the dragon that you speak of...

he is scary yet ever so hypnotic and enticing...all at the same time...

Nicely done DarkOne..

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

Kahlil
Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881

2 posted 2004-10-27 08:58 AM


heh heh
yeahhhhhh

LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

3 posted 2004-10-27 09:03 AM


Another room for thought you place in our hands....but um...I always thought it to be believed that dragons were friendly caring creatures?

Smiles and hugs....Good morning wordmyster

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

4 posted 2004-10-27 09:06 AM


yep....and you draw so very well....
Good morning Dark one.

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

Susan
Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
5 posted 2004-10-27 10:07 AM


I am the hand that draws the lines

at the edge of your woman's eyes

in colors of vivid dreams that pour to the seams of a woman's desires -

Morning D - S

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
6 posted 2004-10-27 11:36 AM


A most fitting poem
given the season...


babygirlwlove
Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180
New York City
7 posted 2004-10-27 11:51 AM


score 1 for the dragon...

lol

love this,
**babygirL**

**Intoxicant to the SouL**

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