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Toe Dancing - for Toe, and in memory...
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Toe Dancing - for Toe, and in memory... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Toe Dancing May I, please, then dream again and dance upon your toes once more might I see, again, the sun backlight your frame against the door for I am your most cherished waif, your dearest one and you, you named me for a song you had sung I hear it in your blue your timbered voice still taunts my mind and I’ve cherished so the haunt of time I hear the chuckle and the glee there in your smile that captured we for I am your most cherished waif, your dearest one and you, you named me for a song you had sung I hear it in your blue the music on the radio plays your grin still with me stays and even with your grandiose ways you allowed me to dance upon your toes Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
I think I can say "thanks" for both of us....lovely write gal.... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 I can't find the words right now, maybe never will, but know that this touches me |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very touching write Karilea... He is a dear kind hearted soul. Hugs~ ~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea So sweet, and it did bring back memories of dancing with my father. Thank you for that..  |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
You are so good....so Good.... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Oh, lady... this leaves me speechless... and smiling. *S* |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
Big hug coming for our Toe. When I read this my sister came to mind when she would sing to me as a little child. How I do miss that dear, dear, lady. See Ya BonBon  |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Isn't that about the same as a whole dance floor?  And thank you for a fab write. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, my! You got to dance on Toe's toes?!? ~ He makes me kiss them!!!  Trip the Toe fantastic! ~ or is that supposed to be trip the light fantastic! lol & Linda |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Ahah! I knew someone tiptoed him here and figured it may have been you  Very sweet write for that rascal I must say. He is so spoiled by us ladies. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
This is too good not to bring back to the top.. "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
tremendous...and he's worth every word, and even more.... You both dance so elegantly..... Loved this...smiles and hugs |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
tip TOE through the two lips???? LOL enjoyed this, hope Toe is doing OK today |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
enjoyed this delicate dance |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
LMAO@Kacy I am just shocked that hasn't been said before... "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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