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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2004-10-21 04:39 PM

Before she dismisses them
like naughty children
and they gather in a shrine
of reminiscense beneath
her dishelved shoulders,

she will shake and tremble
and play their martyr,
then for the keeper
be his whore of desire,

the unraveling of her dilemma
is somewhere deciphered
in the patterns of pictures
that tally before her,

sequestered to the ground
in a plaid printed cover,
the sojourning leaves
as revelations fawn upon her.

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (10-21-2004 09:32 PM).]

J.Samm
Member

since 2004-01-12

Posts 415
Iloilo City, Philippines

1 posted 2004-10-21 09:31 PM

splendid images... a touching write

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2004-10-21 09:36 PM

"sequestered to the ground
in a plaid printed cover,
the sojourning leaves
as revelations fawn upon her."

Love the way you see things Michele...
wonderful write.
Hugs~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

3 posted 2004-10-22 04:38 AM

Hey Michele,

you know someone was just speaking to me of trees and the way you have depicted her here is quite amazing, beautiful actually, just as she was meant to be seen.

ice
Member Elite

since 2003-05-17

Posts 3404
Pennsylvania

4 posted 2004-10-22 06:56 AM

excellent-enjoyed
--------ice
><>

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

5 posted 2004-10-22 08:31 PM

Love this -

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

6 posted 2004-10-22 08:52 PM

You are amazing in the images you paint on a page. Exceptionally well done Inked one.
TD

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

7 posted 2004-10-22 08:56 PM

You see the world as if through the eyes of a deva spirit...

As leaves do fall away from the tree, so too may all your burdens.

Linda

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

8 posted 2004-10-24 02:24 AM

Love this, inked.

Maree

and I am haunted
by my illicit exquisite dream
but I can't really wake up
so I just drift in between

~ani difranco~

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

9 posted 2004-10-24 07:12 AM

You write it so well.

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

ice
Member Elite

since 2003-05-17

Posts 3404
Pennsylvania

10 posted 2004-10-24 07:47 AM

Inky (just had to make a second reply)

Just the other day I laid on that plaid garment...looked up through the trees at the Delft sky...tried to find words such as these, but was too overwhelmed by the beauty of the scene..
You put my feelings into better words than I could find...thank you for this expression..

---------ice/ford
><>

Come read to me some poem,
Some simple and heartfelt lay,
That shall soothe this restless feeling
And banish the thoughts of day.
Longfellow

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

11 posted 2004-10-24 08:27 PM

thank you so much for stopping by

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