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SEA
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with you


0 posted 10-04-2004 07:22 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for SEA




And I wanted to tell you
so many times
but the words were choked
by pride
by fear

too many times
I looked at you
unable to comprehend
why you were the only one
that didn’t know
that couldn’t see

endless nights I ached
for understanding
for answers
and still my heart repeated...
‘why’

and I needed to tell you
regardless of the late hour
or the unrequited emotions
I just needed you to know

I love you
I’ve always loved, you
I will forever
love
you



~SEA~
© Copyright 2004 S.E. A - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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Somewhere in time~


1 posted 10-04-2004 07:24 PM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

Beautiful declaration of your love Susan.
Wonderfully penned.
Hugs~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

coyote
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2 posted 10-04-2004 07:42 PM       View Profile for coyote   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for coyote

"endless nights I ached
for understanding
for answers
and still my heart repeated...
‘why’"

I know the feeling well.

Nicely penned, SEA.

Billy 8)


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3 posted 10-04-2004 07:46 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Ever enchanting, SEA...

the graphic and poetry lends to each other kindly, and as always your earnest heart shines so intent, I'm frankly surprised there are no indentations on my screen.

Smile.

In other words, lovely.
Dark Angel
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4 posted 10-04-2004 08:13 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Oh I felt this one, deeply.

Beautiful expressed SEA, and I love the graphic too

Maree

cuz fate is not just whose cooking smells good
but which way the wind blows

~ani difranco~

Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song


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"
too many times
I looked at you
unable to comprehend
why you were the only one
that didn’t know
that couldn’t see"
******************

perhaps maybe blinded by love's light?

Wonderful write and much enjoyed.  One that I think maybe more out there that can relate to than maybe willing to admit it.
Aenimal
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the ass-end of space


6 posted 10-04-2004 11:41 PM       View Profile for Aenimal   Email Aenimal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aenimal

yes yes, before regrets sink in

beautiful words Susan
Larry C
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7 posted 10-05-2004 12:04 AM       View Profile for Larry C   Email Larry C   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Larry C's Home Page   View IP for Larry C

Blind! He's just blind. Lucky. But blind. Pity... Bunnie hugs sweet lady and a lot of 'em.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

SEA
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8 posted 10-05-2004 12:10 AM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

thank you guys so much... I'm so grateful to have a place to bring my heart, and share it...knowing, you will understand and relate. and Raph? sometimes after they already have hon...the words still need to be said.
JamesMichael
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9 posted 10-05-2004 12:49 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

And now I know...I know this is not for me, but someone's got some nice words coming to them...James
Janet Marie
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10 posted 10-05-2004 11:57 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

oh but that ache makes for such lovely heart-on-sleeve-SEA-poetry.
*smiling at Sens reply*

I would love to live as a river flows, carried by the surprise of its own unfolding.

~Fluent~
John O'Donohue

Ericc
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11 posted 10-05-2004 12:09 PM       View Profile for Ericc   Email Ericc   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ericc

Perfectly beautiful!

Eric
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12 posted 10-05-2004 12:22 PM       View Profile for msrascalx   Email msrascalx   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for msrascalx

I don't think I've read anything more beautiful.
LeeJ
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SE PA


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an honest and touching write
very much enjoyed
Paula Finn
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14 posted 10-05-2004 01:23 PM       View Profile for Paula Finn   Email Paula Finn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Paula Finn

And sometimes even after you finally say the words...it still doesnt seem as if they were heard....beautiful Sea
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15 posted 10-05-2004 02:11 PM       View Profile for Gentle Spirit   Email Gentle Spirit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Spirit

Sea your writing always captivates me, and this is indeed one of those times...
how very lovely this is.  Hugs and peace.  ~D~

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

MGROVES
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16 posted 10-05-2004 02:26 PM       View Profile for MGROVES   Email MGROVES   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for MGROVES

i too know this feeling to well

Robert Frazier
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17 posted 10-05-2004 02:56 PM       View Profile for Robert Frazier   Email Robert Frazier   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Robert Frazier

Beautiful poetry, from a beautiful heart.

Rf
Robert Joseph
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18 posted 10-05-2004 04:59 PM       View Profile for Robert Joseph   Email Robert Joseph   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Robert Joseph

Love the art work, and the "heart-cry" following. Greatly enjoyed!

Robert Joseph
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19 posted 10-05-2004 05:37 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

beautiful!
Susan
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20 posted 10-05-2004 07:18 PM       View Profile for Susan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Susan

sigh - love softely woven

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

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SEA~
You KNOW you touch me with your lovely thoughts~
Thank you~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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dgvarner
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22 posted 10-05-2004 09:52 PM       View Profile for dgvarner   Email dgvarner   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for dgvarner

SEA..
I can feel the words there at the end, the state of needing to say the words..needing the other person to hear!!  

much enjoyed
hugs, g

"Now would you mind if I bared my soul / If I came right out and said you're beautiful..."  B. Adams

Gentle Spirit
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23 posted 10-06-2004 07:37 PM       View Profile for Gentle Spirit   Email Gentle Spirit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Spirit

Just wanted to feel the lovely sigh in this one again Sea...

wonderful writing....
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24 posted 10-06-2004 07:49 PM       View Profile for devinechild22   Email devinechild22   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devinechild22

I am touched... I relate.

                       *Allison*


 
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