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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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 He smelled of cedar crisp, like early mornings in late September with beautiful eyes and a dangerous smile making me wish for things I didn’t yet understand innocence, and romantic notions of holding hands, a heart stopping kiss unexpected..... He was poetry written upon my soul before I knew the words... Those dreams, they don’t fade and that innocence is never lost and sometimes, late in September I am reminded with the smell of cedar and the memory of that kiss..... ~SEA~ |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
He was poetry written upon my soul before I knew the words...'' OH Susan....lord have mercy...what a beautiful feeling....this touches me in ways I have no words for....thank you I don’t want the world to see me |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
 thank you Lauren, you are always so nice  |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Susan, So you are holding to the innocent line then? Another excellent write, thank you.  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Kevo Member
since 2004-06-02
Posts 466Navarro County, Texas, USA |
Cedar? This poem makes me want to find some cedar, rub it all over then go hug my wife and see if it invokes the same thing! This was a memorable piece. I can't relate to the cedar, though. It smells great but not necessarily on a woman. I prefer perfumes. My wife always smells so soft and beautiful. Whether she's wearing perfume or not. This poem reminds me of the first time I met her. Her smile, her charm, and her scent are all things that I cherish from our first meeting. Thanks for taking me down memory lane for a moment with this beautiful piece of writing. It really put a smile on my face. Now, where the heck did I put that cedar? Your poetic friend, Kevin |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a beautiful write |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
beautiful and i loved the pic |
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Margot Member
since 2003-10-04
Posts 154 |
Absolutely beautiful Margot Love is something eternal, The aspect may change, But not the essence.- Vincent Van Gogh |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
You kissed Prince! Beautiful oh romantic Susan of the Sea.  |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Who forgets that kiss? Well done! "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
He was poetry written upon my soul before I knew the words... Those dreams, they don’t fade and that innocence is never lost and sometimes, late in September I am reminded with the smell of cedar and the memory of that kiss..... Lord Sea, this is so hauntingly beautiful...what a wonderful line! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
...and now you have "Reminded" me!... Thank you, SEA!  Love & Light, EA |
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sim0riah Member
since 2004-09-07
Posts 253Wyoming USA |
Very Nice and Sweet...Looking forward to reading more from you... sim0riah |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
lovely, soft and very honest |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Larry...*bunny hugs* for you... thank you Kevin...rofl be careful of splinters! Thanks so much Dixie...thank you MGROVES... thank you very much Margot...thank you! Sharon...good grief I WISH!!! LOL thanksSusan...*sigh* I know I never will...thank you Donna you are so sweet, thank you! EA glad to have reminded you, thank you sim0riah...thanks very much, I will have to find you and read you too! LeeJ...thank you for that |
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msflame Member
since 2002-05-21
Posts 188 |
innocence, and romantic notions of holding hands, a heart stopping kiss unexpected..... He was poetry written upon my soul before I knew the words..." This is how I feel about my love! How wonderfully you write. So glad to have read this tonight! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
He was poetry written upon my soul before I knew the words... Sweet perfection SEA !! Love this. Brought back memories of a special kiss at the age of sixteen and the perfume I wore called Woodhue by Faberge'. Thankyou for sharing this gem with us. Library bound! hugs, Chris "At one glance |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
may you be so reminded |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
SEA, this was a perfect reminder of one of my own memories...it's true, but with me it is October, not September. Lovely, lovely writing, BTW. .....jo |
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soul drifter Senior Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 711Colorado |
Wow, very lovely, filled with many lines that cut through to me, to live warm under my ribs. Nicely done. "Poets are all who love, who feel great truths, and tell them; and the truth of truths is love." --Philip James Bailey |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
I'm always reminded of how much I like to read your thoughts and words... when I see your name on the pages... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
And I am reminded how beautifully you write, gal How I miss you and easy access to these blue pages..... Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautiful. Eric |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
innocence is overrated. this poem's not.  |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Msflame~ thank you very much Chris~ glad it brought that special memory back for you! Eric~ thank you Jo~ Sept, Oct and Nov...best time of the year Soul Drifter~ that was great, thank you! Ron~ Interloper~ you dear one, are missed Kissy Face~ thanks |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
"He was poetry written upon my soul before I knew the words..." That's such a lovely line, am *speechless* for once lol *hug*, Lizzie. "Time has told me not to ask for more, one day our ocean will find its shore" ~Nick Drake |
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