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SEA
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with you


0 posted 09-02-2004 12:00 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for SEA





Take me down
to a moonlit riverís view
wade me in the depths
swirl me
in the heart of you

~*~

soak me in serenity
drench my soul
with love confide
bathe me in emotions
youíve kept hidden inside

~*~

saturate my senses,
immerse me in touch
that is you
ripple me in dreams
then make them come true

~*~


~SEA~

© Copyright 2004 S.E. A - All Rights Reserved
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Somewhere in time~


1 posted 09-02-2004 12:04 PM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

Oh my how beautiful this is Susan!!
So good to be home and read you once again.
~Smiles & Hugs~

~ Summer can't be over...
I still have sand in my shoes. ~

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this is so pretty
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SEA~
This is delicately GORGEOUS~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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oh yes!

I love this!
JamesMichael
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Lovely...James
Susan
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6 posted 09-02-2004 07:46 PM       View Profile for Susan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Susan

Beautifully romantic- swirl me - yes, love it.

Susan

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then make them come true


yes~~

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Ripple away...
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9 posted 09-03-2004 04:58 PM       View Profile for E S West   Email E S West   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for E S West

What can one say of these words?... WOW!

   Beautiful work.....  E S West
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Susan,
I like that I can count on a delightful experience when I open your threads. And such enticing pictures to spur your delicate writing. You rock!

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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Susan, I loved this!  It is so romantic.... so passionate!   ....jo
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By the Seaside


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Such gentle ripples you leave behind.

Enjoyed the swirl, very much.


Hugs, SEAgal~

Larry C
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One more time...

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

ESP
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Floating gently on a cloud....


14 posted 12-01-2004 04:11 AM       View Profile for ESP   Email ESP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ESP

Oooh nice one...to me it felt like a river: slow and lazy to begin with and then gathering momemtum with the imperatives as though it were approaching a falls, flying over the falls and once at the bottom comes the calm after the stormy water, with the gently rippling last two lines.
But then, I am kinda loony.
*hug*, Lizzie.

"Time has told me not to ask for more, one day our ocean will find its shore" ~Nick Drake

 
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