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This Need {from the ramble series}
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This Need {from the ramble series} |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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Should I ramble now, or hold these thoughts here inside where they rest, residing in dormant places; or let them flow from pen to paper? Dormant, my visions have been for so long locked within but unknown to me as to reasons of why. The silence in the air lingers so, although all that surrounds is turned up as loud as it can possibly be but still.... the quiet is found within {and what will be, will be...} I had begged, I had pleaded but tonight? Tonight, I did not ask, no, I nary even gave thought to the writing of words the voice of inner steadily increased in volume until all other sounds were diminished into a distant back round, and I, though being aware of their existence no longer acknowledged them. This prevailing need took precedence to a moment seemingly predetermined, no longer to be repressed.... days having passed, a muse in isolation, enduring this separation of thoughts, no longer flowing. {Sweet release would be welcome} The mind says, the pen can not, will not write, but my soul screams you must.... You must.... Today, I did not think to write, but the need told me that it was time.... {I wanna cry like the rain Cry like the rain Shine like the sun on a beautiful mornin' Sing to the heavens like a church bell ringin' Fight with the devil and go down swingin' Fly like a bird Roll like a stone Love like I aint afraid to be alone Take everything that this world has to give I wanna take any breath I can get I wanna live } Josh Gracin |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Dormant, my visions have been for so long locked within but unknown to me as to reasons of why. ~*~ Isn't it wonderful when we have the key to unlock those very reasons? Enjoyed this, little one. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely done... not knowing anything about being driven to write or the obsessive nature of a muse..I'll take your word for the emtions behind it...  lmao seriously.. good flow..and one I enjoyed |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I love it when you ramble  it makes me think |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Sunshine, why...of course it is... when we finally find them...  Cpat, you made me smile, thank you. I am sure many of us know nothing of obsessive natured muses! Dixie, sometimes thinking can be good, lol...other times it just plain makes my darn head hurt! lmao. Thanks gal. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Never resist the soul's scream! The well of inspiration wants to flow ... as you show, so lovingly. Enjoyed your reflections, gentle spirit. Love and Joy. Margherita  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Should I ramble now, or hold these thoughts here inside ===================== I vote for you to .... RAMBLE ON !!! escpecially when you write as lovely as this... This prevailing need took precedence to a moment seemingly predetermined, no longer to be repressed.... days having passed, a muse in isolation, enduring this separation of thoughts, no longer flowing. {Sweet release would be welcome} The mind says, the pen can not, will not write, but my soul screams you must.... You must.... Today, I did not think to write, but the need told me that it was time.... you write the passion we feel for muse perfectly Donna...love this one. I would love to live as a river flows, carried by the surprise of its own unfolding. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Donna, I agree with the 42 font exclamation of JM....Ramble on. I think your muse has got you fooled...cause you are doing just fine!! |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
you shine, even in silence. we all see it but here, your voice sings and we all want to sing along |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Fantastic sweet lady!! I love this!!! Hugs~ ~ Those who complain the sun has gone out of their world |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
ooohh, thank you all so much! You are more than kind. I just gotta get back in here to reply to each of you as soon as I can, but thank you all so much! Hugs and peace. |
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