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Song Of Life {with thanks to Cpat}
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Song Of Life {with thanks to Cpat} |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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Lost seasons, {utterances of yesterday} whisper to me in soft recollection.. Rivers wind through time memories float in perpetual motion {ripples growing} Skies of blue and trees of green joining voices singing a song perhaps... unknown to others like a hidden treasure that only I can find; an unpolished gem buried under waters steady flow gently sifting, {shifting sands} until the smooth shines through. Is it merely a voice from no where, or is it myself that I hear quietly speaking to the spirit of inner? Calling to me *a heart drawn by melodies* internally heard is a song... of life. *with special thanks to Cpat for this inspire* It's better than I could have planned.. it's made me who I am... {Trace Adkins} |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ever the learned student... you listen VERY well... |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Donna...what a lovely inspire!  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Does the nature of reality possess complexion? Irrefutable entry I loved this and what it speaks...thank you kindly for writing and sharing. You are a gift! |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
ah, see, easy to be inspired by cpat...and looks as though you ran wild with it  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent write sweet lady!! This is a wonderful keeper for my library. Hugs~ ~ Those who complain the sun has gone out of their world |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely written ma'am.. nice indeed.. you do not need to thank me for anything though.. what you might have read or taken from what I wrote is yours ma'am... just like the images you take from a sunset or from sunrise are yours to write about and expand upon... I'm flattered.. that something I might have written inspired... but this piece stands on its own...and owes nothing to me or my words..it comes from you.. and you deserve the bows for what you have done here.. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Ya'll are making me grin here.  Cpat thank you sir. That is soappreciated. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"Is it merely a voice from no where, or is it myself that I hear quietly speaking to the spirit of inner?" ~ Donna this was especially poetic, moving, inspiring and spiritual!  Loving hugs, Linda  |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Donna, this was absolutely lovely -- it flows just like a spring brook! ....jo |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Linda, Jo, thank you both so much. Happy Morning! |
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