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LeeJ
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0 posted 2004-08-10 11:28 AM


Distant echo of surrounding highways
Crowded streets consider magnetic sway
Stillness follows me…circuit rider of healers
Slow evolution, stumbling into believers
Self-stamped themes, thinking European
Frontier of passing days without pain
As you stand in the justice of evening breeze

Suffocation accounts for some measures of winter
Is not the face of inevitability fascinating?
Sacraments courting the mystery of probability
Becomes the face of revelation, illuminating
How superior to mysticism, this image and likeness is
Transforming…the other side, uncovering civilizations
Reading the likely seduction by ethereal warriors
To a peace which surpasses any understanding
It is Wright’s polishing the sterling silver of nature
Rooted in the mystery of life and its behavior
By divine association, center of man in the cosmos



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1 posted 2004-08-10 12:21 PM


(chuckling)
  you do work the words... far beyond my simple method and mind...

MGROVES
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2 posted 2004-08-10 02:37 PM


very wise lady with a beautiful heart


Ericc
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3 posted 2004-08-10 02:47 PM


Awesome write!

Eric

iliana
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4 posted 2004-08-15 01:28 AM


So many outstanding lines and metaphors.  I'm going back to read it again.   ....jo
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5 posted 2004-08-15 01:35 AM


I read you and I feel like I just traveled through a time machine.

Your work is like that for me, flashes of images connecting in surreal edges, making some sort of strobed sense that I couldn't translate even I wanted to.

(see? yer contagious!)

Enjoyed, LeeJ.

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