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Master
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since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867
Boston, MA

0 posted 2004-08-14 09:35 PM


If only for the simple fact
That distance nurtures ardor,
Somehow, one must adapt
To live without the other.

The parting seconds must
Be passionate and brief.
You kissed me by the bus.
I didn't want to leave.

Although I could've stopped
The flow of time, this rapture's
Reserved for cameras and not
For poetry to capture.

By God, I swear, I've tried
- (although, we know, time flies), -
To savor everything that I
Could not immortalize...



Check out my poetry here:

http://www.unknownpoets.com/db/authors/master


© Copyright 2004 Andrey Kneller - All Rights Reserved
iliana
Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
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1 posted 2004-08-15 01:04 AM


  Great write, Master!
Midnitesun
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Gaia
2 posted 2004-08-15 01:14 AM


BRAVO is right, this is a really cool write!
passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2004-08-15 03:01 AM


wow...pretty cool
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