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RedStoneEB
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since 2003-06-08
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0 posted 2004-08-07 02:23 PM




Not a man or the child nor any such male
Like the tears you relate to men been such hurtful pain
Been the cause after all most guys are to blame
Spoken to a friend such lies you say
“Males are all the same” not I nor me.

Don’t wear the tag of the jerk on my wrist
Nor the cheeky guilt written face that came with it
Nor the car that goes faster than light
Or even have a well known style not I nor me.

© Copyright 2004 Lee Hepworth - All Rights Reserved
inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
1 posted 2004-08-07 11:08 PM


no, of course not, not ever you
ice
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since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404
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2 posted 2004-08-08 05:12 PM


Red
Sounds like some has had a bad expierance with men and now is judging all by that, including you..
Nicely expressed
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