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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain 
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 "Kind words can be short and easy to speak, but their echoes are truly endless." |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
ooh....this is so good, but so poignant. heart hugs dear poet. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Snow angel, you have ripped your heart out and bled before us. You made a novel and unusual metaphor come to life...painfully beautiful.  ....jo |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
ok no more making me cry... i'm supposed to have purged all that during the writing.... *soft smile* .... thank you both so very much. hugs... snow "Kind words can be short and easy to speak, but their echoes are truly endless." |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
I like this one. :-) |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Hello Snow. Mmm! What to say...what to say. Well first I must say is this is not what I expected. Now having got that out let me move on. EXCELL(FABULOSIOSIS)ENT! Okay so that is not a real word...but heck this poem deserves the creation of one. This is stark naked, pure hurt. It says...hey I am in pain...and that is just the way it is. I love it! This shows depth. Wonderfully done! Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
thank you all for the comments. and kevin, if you want romance, you're just going to have to get that pc back up and working, crank out some poems and inspire me love... my muse seems to be edgy these days instead of hearts and flowers... *S* ... but your comment to this was wonderful, thank you!!! i've missed you. *hugs* "Kind words can be short and easy to speak, but their echoes are truly endless." |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
no words |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
words aren't needed. the fact that you took the time to let me know you read this is so appreciated. honestly, for me, i just want to write... and knowing someone read what i wrote is more than enough... thank you! snow "Kind words can be short and easy to speak, but their echoes are truly endless." --Mother Teresa |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
ouch |
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