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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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I laughed listening to news thinking, yeah she gives a damn about the stats of record sales and how she is already old then I thought perhaps she did give a damn, I mean twist her this and bend her that and she'll sell much better than she ever had before I laughed thinking that is all she wrote? no place else to go but down then I heard a publicist urge "they like it if you jump so show them you are serious and take a role that shows the depth of a woman's ugliness and don't forget to thank the crew for turning you.. miraculous into a monster (just like us?) Oh. Let me be serious. I laughed listening to tunes recorded by the slick cartoons wondering how this can be the demon spawn of MTV 5.7 seconds spot gotta give it all you got or someone with controls (like me?) will flip on past publicity creating my own forms of art visuals they're there! then not! Let's not be too serious. I like to watch that woman stomp christianity across a stage I thought it apt displayed that she stopped at a man's crotch as he stood there blushing christ it was ludicrous alright Oh-let-me-be-serious This is something I could watch like the yoga blonde at dawn amusing she will stifle yawn with her row of shiny teeth instructing her vagina "breathe!" whistled negativity through her nostrils flared. despair oh she can't be serious. Help me I'm delirious imaging dexterity wond'rin' who am I to judge? just a watcher after all clicking my own life away (I don't want to be like this) much too much too serious talking to a screen. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
you write my friend from places and with insight most, simply never know... brava.... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
and I parrot the comment above adding marvelous write!!!!! |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
WOW!! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Jesus Karen...you just wow me. incredible you. Mxx The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Oh-let-me-be-serious This is something I could watch like the yoga blonde at dawn amusing she will stifle yawn with her row of shiny teeth instructing her vagina "breathe!" whistled negativity through her nostrils flared. despair oh she can't be serious. Help me I'm delirious imaging dexterity wond'rin' who am I to judge? just a watcher after all clicking my own life away (I don't want to be like this) much too much too serious talking to a screen. =============================== wowzers... I dont get these channels  you rock girl..you can turn anything into poetry.... ( at least poetry dont have infomercials) yet!! |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Gal....you musta lived thru the late 60's and early 70's...ya just gotta have?...You think alot like me, but express yourself so much better...... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Let's not be too serious. ~*~ Brava! |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"(I don't want to be like this)" hmmmmmmmmm... I know that thought.. I hate reality shows...so many are so shallow...yet some of them catch my attention...and I pretend by being negative... grrrrrrrrrr  love ya!"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Let's not be too serious. I like to watch that woman stomp christianity across a stage I thought it apt displayed that she stopped at a man's crotch as he stood there blushing christ it was ludicrous alright Oh ya ... you've gone and written another awesome piece!! Hugs to you woman! Chrislane |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Silly Putty -- yep and nope -- what a write! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I can picture your postures, gesticulations and expressions as you sit there with the clicker and staring at the boob tube. Yeppers! I see what you see! ~ and I enjoyed your very nutty silly putty! lol  Linda |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh that last verse...uh-huh |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
or someone with controls (like me?) will flip on past publicity creating my own forms of art visuals they're there! then not! ***** I had to laugh here, as I can see you in 3D, sitting with that remote, blitzing past all those blitzy schitzy quick shots. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I must need therapy? I treat it all as entertainment, and take not one thing seriously. 1/2 or one hour a day is good for a laugh. Oh darn dropped my clicker...there, flick, flick, flick, nope, nope, ok ... a home reno show. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice read  |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
Ok Let ME be serious... My favorite of yours... ever.. ! |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Help me I'm delirious imaging dexterity wond'rin' who am I to judge? just a watcher after all clicking my own life away (I don't want to be like this) much too much too serious talking to a screen. I enjoyed the whole piece, yep, indeed, but this last, it spoke to me, I know people like this Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Gawd woman you write amazing poetry! Wish I had an ounce of your talent. Love ya lady~Hugs. ~ Those who complain the sun has gone out of their world |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I wanted to say a quick thanks to all--especially to my girl Maree, who inspired this one with a chat session about "writing" and just talkin'...so I thought I'd try to write the way I talk, and this is what came out! Hope you all enjoyed. I'm off to read--there's a buffet of poetry on the board today and I'm hungry.  Love you all, and thanks again! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
You my dear...are wonderful! Blushing brilliant on the blue here. TD |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
You write things I wish I'd written. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Meg & Kathleen, thanks for reading me. And oh yeah, the title...grin? I entitled it that because when I was a kid, I preferred modeling clay..."silly putty" was only superior to the "real thing" for taking "imprints" off of the Sunday comics--and it was that thought that led to my little conversation with nobody.  sheesh. (Oh. And silly putty could bounce too.) Hugs all. I'm off to read. There's been some terrific poetry on the board this week and you all inspire me more than you could ever know. thank you |
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