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Ceinwyn
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0 posted 08-01-2004 11:06 PM       View Profile for Ceinwyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Ceinwyn

make love to my mind
crawl inside
darkness beckons
cobweb binds, my hands and mouth
come be my muse
entrap me
wrap me
with obtuse, notions
diamonds
glittering snow
follow me darling
we'll be late for the show
I have paid your fare
no need for excuse
just fall into my mind
let me be your muse


If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

© Copyright 2004 Kristen Brandon - All Rights Reserved
miscellanea
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OH


1 posted 08-01-2004 11:22 PM       View Profile for miscellanea   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for miscellanea

I'll drink to that!  Enjoyed much!
              misc'e
Earth Angel
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2 posted 08-01-2004 11:29 PM       View Profile for Earth Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Earth Angel's Home Page   View IP for Earth Angel

"make love to my mind"

~ I absolutely adore that line!

For me, that is where it all starts!


EA
Susan
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walking the surreal


3 posted 08-01-2004 11:31 PM       View Profile for Susan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Susan

Yes, I hear this.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

iliana
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4 posted 08-02-2004 03:57 AM       View Profile for iliana   Email iliana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for iliana

Ceinwyn -- I think you found the muse alright.     Great write.  ......jo
Elan
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State of Wide Eye


5 posted 08-04-2004 03:18 PM       View Profile for Elan   Email Elan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elan

*SmilinG*

This makes me want to reverse the spelling of dog...

Well done, Ceinwyn.
Midnitesun
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Gaia


6 posted 08-04-2004 07:49 PM       View Profile for Midnitesun   Email Midnitesun   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Midnitesun

Well done! enjoyed this one.
mytuesdaywishes
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a voice from the musicbox


7 posted 11-07-2004 07:49 AM       View Profile for mytuesdaywishes   Email mytuesdaywishes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mytuesdaywishes

perfect....i love reading your stuff

in the end it's not just you with your memories and your scars, fall on me if you ever forget how beautiful you are.

zippi
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8 posted 11-08-2004 06:07 PM       View Profile for zippi   Email zippi   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for zippi

Now…when all the lights are out
And not a fool can see.
Now…when it could matter less
My tongue has been set free.
My imagination’s soaring
I feel like I could sing.
With no one here to notice
My soul has taken wing.
Perhaps that’s how it’s meant to be,
With no audience around.
Perhaps just like that fallen tree
A soul still makes a sound.
And so, I sing to darkness
Without a single ear
I whisper dreams of childhood
With no one there to here.
I share a smile with emptiness
And fill the room with knowing
That even with no eye to see
My naked soul is showing.
www.InnerCirclePublishing.com

This poem was great fun, your's I mean!
littlewing
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9 posted 11-08-2004 07:35 PM       View Profile for littlewing   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for littlewing

Ha!  Where have you been?  
*grinning*

I miss him too . . .
GG
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10 posted 11-10-2004 08:14 PM       View Profile for GG   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for GG

With that title and then that first line I knew this would be interesting. It is. I like it. Y'know, I could use a new muse...

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

 
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