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Juju
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since 2003-12-29
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In your dreams

0 posted 2004-07-18 09:27 PM



Facination with the rain,
causes remembrance of pain.
Oh how the tears flow,
when I cant let go...
Of that one memory
that scared our history.

Time just will not unfold
nor tell a story untold.
we chose our own desisions
and go blind by disallusions
all the while we regret
of the day that we first met

Now what can I say?
That I am in dismay?
Now I can not blame
Just for my own shame.
of what we had and what we lost,
I would say it was worth the cost

I would rather Not be bitter
so know this about my litter
and throw it in the trash
like monopoly cash
or maybe we'll together
learn to love one another

and regret will be only memories
when I walk with you through the rains stories.....


Juju

" I was following the northstar, and now I am not quite sure it was the north star."-- Juju

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Susan
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since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
1 posted 2004-07-19 08:48 PM


Sad, like the rain.  Once I loved the rain, not any more.  Now give me a good storm!

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

devinechild22
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since 2002-08-28
Posts 571

2 posted 2004-07-19 09:26 PM


I really enjoyed this. I do like the rain. It's calming.
                   *Allison*

~~~***~~~Come away with me, Wendy. Come away to Neverland~~~***~~~

Juju
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since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429
In your dreams
3 posted 2004-07-19 09:34 PM


I onced loved it too,
now just complete fasination

Juju

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