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marcel
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0 posted 2004-07-15 06:05 PM


Mama, your heart can stop weeping,
I heard Heaven is doing him right;
On his tip-toes he rang the bell,
The chimes began to ring
And God with a smile let him in.

Marcel


© Copyright 2004 keith marcel - All Rights Reserved
iliana
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1 posted 2004-07-15 06:13 PM


  This short piece brought tears to my eyes.   ......jo
miscellanea
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2 posted 2004-07-15 07:20 PM


This is precious!
          misc'e

Susan
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3 posted 2004-07-15 07:30 PM


  

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

ThisDiamond
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4 posted 2004-07-15 10:54 PM


So very heartfelt.
TD

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