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Dr.Moose1
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0 posted 2004-07-15 04:51 PM


Aligning the planets according to whim,
celestial manuevers performed with a flair,
the day-dreamers gather strange thoughts unto them
controlling the outcome of random affairs.

Improbable matters appear everyday
as dabble in magic, great feats to perform.
A standard of conduct at odds you might say
with what the less fortunate see as the norm.

What manner of things do they see with those eyes?
What windows are opened where our's remain closed?
Such things have been known to materialize,
the Arts and the Sciences, but two of those.

The daydreamers gather strange thoughts to themselves,
a notion that poets just might share as well.

[This message has been edited by Dr.Moose1 (07-15-2004 10:24 PM).]

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Midnitesun
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1 posted 2004-07-15 05:37 PM


"the day-dreamers gather strange thoughts unto them
controlling the outcome of random affairs."

I hope so, cuz I'm a dreamer!

iliana
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2 posted 2004-07-15 05:44 PM


"The daydreamers gather strange thoughts to themselves,
a notion that poets just might share as well."

Dr.Moose1, this is a wonderful write!  It will hold a special place in my library.  


Sunnyone
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3 posted 2004-07-16 03:12 AM


Hi Doc, and as I read here, and other pieces, I come to the conclusion that most of us are 'daydreamers'!  Thanks for the thoughts...from one daydreamer to another...~S~

Music washes away from the soul the dust of everyday life

Dr.Moose1
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4 posted 2004-07-16 02:30 PM


Midnitesun,iliana,and Sunnyone,
Thank you all for your comments, dream on ( in a good sense of course ).
Doc

ThisDiamond
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5 posted 2004-07-17 10:42 PM


The melody carried these thoughts so well here...dreamers are like that.
The see-ers, the say-ers and poets...
Ah yes.
TD

passing shadows
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6 posted 2004-07-17 11:52 PM


love this!!
Dr.Moose1
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7 posted 2004-07-18 12:50 PM


ThisDiamond,
Thanks. I have always admired those who say
" what if " and then set about create what did not exist before. Whether that be art, or science, or mathmatics, the important thing to me is that these people have a vision and are not afraid to try to make it work.
Doc

passingshadows,
Thanks so much, glad you liked.
Doc

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