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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Puddles I am mostly rain tending to loft in the clouds floating where others are afraid to hang f a l l i n g when I shouldn’t be and you bend to stir the puddles in the lingering liquid wading in with your petals unafraid to drink lightning "be prepared to bleed" Joni Mitchell |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
if I close my eyes the lightning will just be whispers puddles look good on you ms slick |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
wkhen you come ot reckon with your own fears, you find out, lightening can be your friend...and can only hurt you if you let it. Falling is just another word for a new start...smiles and hugs...wishing you lotsa luck with your new career.. |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
I LOVE rain! ...and what's wrong with drinking lightning anyway????? *grin* |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
Now this is a thinker But surely no clinker. Nice images. KJ Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Sounds like lightening could energize those petals. I love the creativity in your poem and how it is open to interpretation. It's a must have addition to the old bookshelves. misc'e |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OneSlick~ This is as fine an offering as I'll read this day~  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
another good write  |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Wonderful write! JL  |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wow...!!! Eric |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
"and you bend to stir the puddles in the lingering liquid wading in with your petals unafraid to drink lightning." _____________________ Wow and Damn! LOVE, love, love the style, presentation and imagery in this....and the ending is perfect! Okay, I have a new favourite of yours Melissa~ Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world! |
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