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Time After Time (reposted for Dixie)
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Time After Time (reposted for Dixie) |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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She dies each time you walk in the door she cries inside; she needs something more, than these things that you are giving and this life that she has been living. Her heart and soul long to be free feeling these things; she can not be, residing in darkness hidden to stay afraid to step into the light of day. She only wishes that you would know she feels so stifled; she can not grow, time after time she's cried her tears you were not there to calm her fears. She stands there rooted in the night but strong she'll grow; each dawns new light, and grow she shall like the mighty oak her fears no longer will she cloak. Someday ending her pain and this mime and she shall live again; time after time. © 2000 ~D~ I would whisper so loudly, that love, and only love, can join the tribes of man....{Judds} |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
absolutely beautiful....you are a true compassionate friend who allows yet, reinforces confidence and the importance of an individuals freedom and tranquility. I believe Dixie is one very lucky gal...who eventually will reap a wealth of gifts from life. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
yes she is, a beautiful person and giving friend. She grows as we all do, and her strength, she shares even when she doesn't realize it. Thank you Lee. Thank you Dix....Hugs. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh Donna...what can I say? Your love shines through and touches my heart. Thank you for reposting, I needed this. I'll keep it in my library for those lonely days when I need to feel like someone understands me. You are precious. Lee, thank you, for being there, being you Hugs  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I love back pages... they hold so much... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh wow! thanks Karilea! I needed this right now...I did Donna |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
sweet write gal.... |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
What a kind expression of support -- a great expression of compassion --  SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Donna, you're a doll to have written this for our Dixie. It shows the depth of your understanding and compassion, and it's a great poem!  ....jo |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
a beauty for a beauty by a beauty enuf said |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
lovely write Donna... M |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
thank you all very much. Dixie, hugs gal. |
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