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0 posted 2004-08-15 12:33 PM





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1 posted 2004-08-15 12:34 PM


Very, very nice.  Beautiful.

Susan

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2 posted 2004-08-15 12:46 PM


loved it m . .. its already in my library
and gave me a butterfly stomach ...
~J

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3 posted 2004-08-15 01:01 PM


what a beauty
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4 posted 2004-08-15 02:04 PM


muted, words and poetry molded into one perfected piece of art!   ....jo
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5 posted 2004-08-15 02:14 PM


Susan: thank you, very nice to be enjoyed

Wolfy: so nice to see you here james, miss your writing so much! and thank you for getting butterflies...the inspiration for this poem has given me butterflies for 4 years. thats alot of tummy flutters!

Dixie: thank you sweetie

Jo: you are always so supportive of me, thank you.

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6 posted 2004-08-15 05:41 PM


"and swallow
my tongue
just to taste
your name
and remain
still life
frame by frame"

WOW, just Wow.



Mxx

The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change.
~Stevie Nicks~

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7 posted 2004-08-15 11:14 PM


simply beautiful !!
hugs, Chris

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I love you
With a thousand hearts."


— Mihri Hatun, Turkish poet

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8 posted 2004-08-15 11:38 PM


This is Fabulous! I love the picture too. Thank you muted.
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9 posted 2004-08-16 12:53 PM


Maree: i got a "wow" eh? LOL , youre the best ya know?

Nightshade: thank you for your lovely comment

~K~: thank YOU, your poetry stirs alot of feelings in me, and inspires me to write it all down. thanks ~K~ for being a damned good poet.

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10 posted 2004-08-16 06:32 AM


Is very awsome buddy.
and where did you find such a perfect photo for the background ?

*adds to library*

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it's the person that puts it there.

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11 posted 2004-08-16 11:32 AM


Lovely

If I were to touch you, would you bleed a velvet river, running miracles through the sodden ground? --Moi

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12 posted 2004-08-16 11:35 AM


Beautiful vision....

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13 posted 2004-08-16 02:23 PM


Moves: hey buddy, dont be a smarty pants LOL
its me buddy, its meeeeee

IndigoEve: thank you

Startime55: very kind, thank you

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