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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2004-07-06 05:14 AM



tomorrow I graduate
16 took the test 14 passed
a class of 21 graduates 14
you have been with me
every step of the way
and I thank you

you go with me

it was you holding my hand in my fears
you have been there tasting my tears
a candle for me to study by at night
the word I needed when I lost my sight
where pain can be a test in disguise
to push my feet so I could rise
there never was a time I was alone
as I walked the streets of unknown
in a world of lock you are my key
tomorrow
I live a dream and you go with me

"be prepared to bleed"  Joni Mitchell

© Copyright 2004 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Professor Gloom
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of Depression
1 posted 2004-07-06 09:25 AM


Nice to be taken along
Enjoyed the journey
Proud of your accomplishment

Gloom

vandana
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2 posted 2004-07-06 10:34 AM


nice
passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2004-07-06 12:22 PM


you never forget your class, it's a special bond
Ericc
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4 posted 2004-07-06 12:57 PM


Thanks for sharing the experince
with your inspired words!

Eric

Tequilia_Sunrise
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Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada
5 posted 2004-07-06 05:22 PM


thank you for sharing , very nice
Krawdad
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6 posted 2004-07-07 02:16 PM


Smiling all day today for you.  
Wish I could be there to see you get badged and to throw you a party.  
CONGRATULATIONS and WELL DONE, Helen!  

Kellie_Cantrell
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7 posted 2004-07-07 02:23 PM


Well written and congratulations! A job and a poem very well done.

                   Love,
             xXx~*KELLIE*~xXx
Graduation : January 29th 2004

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
8 posted 2004-07-07 03:32 PM


psssst....helen....

Kraw wrote a poem just for you!

Dark Stranger
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9 posted 2004-07-07 06:06 PM


kewl........congrats and atta girls....I like how you wrapped this up in heart
Mr»ÄlleÿÇät
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10 posted 2004-07-07 06:14 PM


What a lovely piece.

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