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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2004-07-06 08:50 AM

johnny walker said
the thorn tree
had his skin tied
with whirlwinds
and slow blues
for his jesus

I heard them whirl winds
when they were gloves
with torn fingers
picking up glass
from the frozen hands
of unborn statues

three sundays
don't make forgiven
even back to back
without the nights of sin
and living in sincere
with another woman's woman

highway is back today
pretending another monday
red lights on the cars
with wrinkle skin teens
in the back seat
holding cuffs

wishing for head-on freedom
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Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2004-07-06 08:53 AM

Dark Stranger
A ride on the dark side, perhaps.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

2 posted 2004-07-06 08:57 AM

Sy....just a review of the news after the holiday here in socal...minor mayham...thanks for your reviews my friend

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2004-07-06 09:08 AM

I heard them whirl winds
when they were gloves
with torn fingers
picking up glass
from the frozen hands
of unborn statues

~*~

The lines above
have a tendency
to echo...

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

4 posted 2004-07-06 09:26 AM

most haunting and intriguing words

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2004-07-06 12:33 PM

johnny doesn't talk to me

but that's okay
at least you do

nice write

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2004-07-06 03:04 PM

I have talked to johnny in a long long time...
but this piece did.
well said dark
hugs

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain ~

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

7 posted 2004-07-06 06:45 PM

Love this Mr D

Mxx

The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change.
~Stevie Nicks~

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

8 posted 2004-07-07 06:12 PM

thanks to you all, I appreciate every word
every thought, every smile....

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