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Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

0 posted 2000-04-18 09:09 PM


Part 2

So am I doomed to lose all my loved ones?
Be the last one to survive?
Knowing nothing but darkness and fear?
Till my soul cannot be revived?

Like Dixie Leonard,
Watching all my loved ones die,
Her words of advice,
'Don't outlive them all?'

I didn't ask for this,
These were not the cards I was dealt,
I deserved so much more than this,
This daily pain I felt.

The pain of other's petty jealousies,
They could never understand,
Fearing only beauty and peace,
Living their vengful little plans.

Others fail to see this,
Their evils before it's too late,
Embracing them as their own,
Not seeing the decay in their fates.

I pray I hold my courage,
Though it's weakening and fleeing fast,
I pray for love and loving,
Not just memories of the past...


 A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



© Copyright 2000 Isis - All Rights Reserved
Hope, tears, and renewal
Member
since 2000-03-27
Posts 74

1 posted 2000-04-18 09:36 PM


Hold your courage, Isis.  Never let go of that... that was such a great poem.  Awesome writing.
Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
2 posted 2000-04-18 09:37 PM


Thanks Hope!  But you didn't read part one  

 A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



Irish Rose
Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

3 posted 2000-04-18 10:20 PM


There's nothing more unbearable than needing love in a human touch, somehow I feel that in these words and it is so needed. I hear your soul beating in your poetry, it truly is alive.



 Kathleen


HelenaJ
Member
since 2000-04-04
Posts 81
Kitchener, ont. Canada
4 posted 2000-04-18 10:49 PM


Keep hold of whatever courage is left! It's sometimes are closest friend, and can't slip away with the rest unless we alow it to>

helena

Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
5 posted 2000-04-18 11:20 PM


Thanks again Kathleen and Helena  

 A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



kynder
Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537
Tallahassee, Florida
6 posted 2000-04-19 12:36 PM


oh the hunger of skin, it burns like no other.  how well i can relate.  so much grief you keep in.  some of us will honestly and sincerely give back to you what you so selflessly give--- a ear to hear and a heart that shines from within.  so don't give up ok? tomorrow is a new day.


*****kynder

 
quote:
God will not look you over for medals, degrees or diplomas, but for scars. - written by Elbert Hubbard, profound to Kynder.



Joel the wolf
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
7 posted 2000-04-19 01:25 AM


Isis, look within, pretend your someone that just got into Passions, Hummm?? now what would Isis the knowing say to this little girl??? And Isis knowing the history of this little girl?? and knowing the friends that would move the earth to help this person?? And all the love and light sending your way now??? I wonder what she the understand, knowing, wise, brilliant, beautiful, intelligent, blond, haha I just had to put that in, and adorable. and every dad's perfect little girl.
I just wonder what Isis would say to this person?? Well?? I'm waiting?? I'd like to see a post on that??.
Well you know how old people rant on.
Love you kid.
Joel.

 I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
8 posted 2000-04-19 08:25 PM


Thank you all I love you guys!!  
Joel I wrote the poem for you hon, go looksy

 A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



dhuron
Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476

9 posted 2000-04-19 09:00 PM


Wonderful Poem Isis.

Take strength from all of us, let us help you be strong.  That is what friends are for...

Daniel

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