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Joel the wolf
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp

0 posted 2000-04-19 02:47 PM



I hope it was all worth it to you.

I guess they were all right,
I have been chasing a ghost flight.

Seeming to believe,
I had found lovers reprieve.

Not knowing from the start,
that my heart would depart.

A fools earned I ran,
giving my heart in hand.

She has said she wanted her old life back,
I guess what that can give her I lack.

I feel like a wash out whore,
I sold my soul, my body, my love,
I sold it all, now I abide within the poor.

Yes I sold it all, but for one little part
I have nothing left
I found with a start
I only had what was left
but my white dove has it
what is left of my heart.

Bye Kim. (My White Dove)
----------------------------
Joel,
I howl now with anguish and despair.
Joel

 I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

© Copyright 2000 Joel. - All Rights Reserved
sKiTtLeS
Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 113
wisconsin, u.s.a.
1 posted 2000-04-19 04:45 PM


How painfully sad, my dear Joel.
All I can do is wish and hope for the best for you.

sKiTtLeS~

 "Don't cry because it's over, smile because it happened."
-the words of a friend

kynder
Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537
Tallahassee, Florida
2 posted 2000-04-19 06:09 PM


well, dear joel, i hate to say this, but join the club!!!!   i will never understand how one can turn away the purest love, but... you and i are the proof in the pudding.   i hear your howls, just so you know.  and though they are full of anguish and despair, i will still listen.  email a chick or something!!!!


*****kynder

  The years teach much which the days never know. Ralph Waldo Emerson

Irish Rose
Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

3 posted 2000-04-19 09:44 PM


sometimes having the courage to let someone go is worth howling about but it's so painful. I liked this piece very much

 Kathleen


Hope, tears, and renewal
Member
since 2000-03-27
Posts 74

4 posted 2000-04-19 09:46 PM


Love is both an enemy and a friend... I'm sorry joel, I hope it gets better soon.
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