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The Darkest Path |
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shagirl Junior Member
since 2000-03-20
Posts 18southbeach, usa. |
THE DARKEST PATH The flames behind, I walk alone the darkest path I chose The wind is warms my weary bones I've but my soul to lose The shadows creep, the wind blows low the leaves about me stir Like devils in the afterglow they bring back thoughts of him..... I finally come up to the beach, the thoughtless happy waves The pain of love beyond their reach only mortals are it's slaves I wade into the icy cold I feel death's fetid grip My soul has truly long been lost I yearn for Neptune's crypt The flames behind, i go alone the darkest path I chose The chill it warms my weary bones I've but my soul to lose shagirl.... |
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CrEaTuRe Member
since 2000-01-01
Posts 260Kuala Lumpur,Malaysia |
A great one my dear the sadness it full of life ......hope to see more of your work  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
The flames behind, I walk alone the darkest path I chose The wind is warms my weary bones I've but my soul to lose The shadows creep, the wind blows low the leaves about me stir Like devils in the afterglow they bring back thoughts of him..... --------------------- this is so well written and expressed...the dark emotions of it hold the reader very good work in this piece. take care, jm and you can say baby... baby can I hold you tonight maybe if told you the right words... at the right time, you'd be mine... baby can I hold you tonight... tracy chapman |
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Aiden Kelly Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 148Ft. Wayne, IN USA |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!! i love this piece! the sadness just sets heavily in my heart as i read! hope to read more of your work! awesome job!! (ever read annabelle lee by poe? the ocean images kinda reminded me of that poem...) |
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