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Living a Lie!! |
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devinmaria Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 130Middletown, Ohio |
living my life a lie for whom washing the walls of this cold dark room with tears that pour from my aching soul they know not what i (inside)know dying inside is a love try to remember what i was thinking of gripping the strings of my heart a hate they forced, by love in part crying to be me and only me envisioning a day when they will see praying to God, whom they say i know not for HELL is where i shall rot why can i not crave both when inside i know the truth bottled love screams "HELP" clouding my mind, love is wealth i shall be the richest one i shall buy my own hot sun i will live my life for me maybe someday they will see "burn in hell" they so harshly say "love me still" i beggingly pray undiseased is the sexual lot fear, i shall cradle it not face the day when my sun will shine time is only tested by time happiness will find its way back to lives that go astray and i will get my wish! Trust I seek and I find in you. Everyday for us something new. Open mind for a different view, and nothing else matters. --Metallica |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
devinmaria, this is very beautiful..well written and expressed...full of strong emotions... sad and beautiful with inspiration at the same time... " time is only tested by time happiness will find its way back to lives that go astray and i will get my wish!" nice work!! take care janet marie "Bring it on baby what you getting into... I swear at once it was the little things that mattered-- But it all seems true to you. Say the hell with my name and say the hell with my picture... but swear, for the one time you need me around. And here I'll stand like it matters... Only once love gets through then gets scattered by the rain... But pain gives me the right to be unkind"... Tabitha's Secret |
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Jannel Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492Muncie, IN, USA |
A wonderful description of how if feels to live for others. I enjoyed the strength you displayed. May the wish come true. Jannel "I'm just saying that we've mistaken one for thousands of words, and for that mistake I've caused you such pain that I damn that word." -10000 Maniacs "Jezebel" |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Must agree with Janet Marie's comments. Strong expression! Happiness does find its way! Best wishes, Danny |
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sonjes Senior Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 564North Carolina |
After reading this three times, I found three different meanings. The great thing about this art you created is that it has so many meanings to many different people. The most important being what it means to you, of course. I wonder for whom I live and why I cannot "crave both." Inspire me you have, devinmaria. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
All the twists and turns, I take it as inspiring too!! It's some reminisent of Jim Morrison's writings too. Well done.  May the world hug you today, With it's warmth and love. I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart, That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world, Wishing you well and wishing you love...... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
very good piece devin. happiness does find it's way to you, when you least expect it. |
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