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spiked
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since 2000-01-13
Posts 873
Hammond, La USA

0 posted 2000-01-23 10:51 PM


I feel your pain
I see your hurt
I want so much
To quench your thirst
To fix that pain that hurts inside
To hold you, help you ease your mind
To show you love and help you see
You are my one, the world to me
I save these thoughts for you my dear
They are the ones I hold most near
My Heart.


© Copyright 2000 Richard Rendall - All Rights Reserved
JOY 14
Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA
1 posted 2000-01-24 02:30 PM


Lovely, Spiked.  

 Joy

"To you, my children, These lovely flowers I give.
Prune ye my vines and fig trees,
With care my flowerets tend,
But keep the pathway open,
Your home is at the end."

-Robert Frost
(from: God's Garden)



[This message has been edited by JOY 14 (edited 01-24-2000).]

spiked
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since 2000-01-13
Posts 873
Hammond, La USA
2 posted 2000-01-24 03:04 PM


Thank you Joy
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