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Walter Poe
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since 1999-10-13
Posts 787


0 posted 2000-01-12 11:17 AM


I feel it in me
Growing hurting
This space filled
My heart killed

This feeling
I can't abide
Is ripping me up
Down deep inside

Separateing night and day
In its dark sinister way
Shimmering deep
Inside me sleeps

It is you
I see tonight
And on the tremors
You cannot hide

I dont know you
I have no mind
In these nights
Where spirits hide

Now youve left
And gone away
Ill feel no tremors
Now or anyday

But i miss them now
And i feel the cold
Emptiness unfold
I know the feeling  


Its called ALONE


 Pride of place in the human race goes to one without a trace,
of subtlety style ego or grace for this position, I wish to say, i would be proud as i am greater than any other face in the crowd

© Copyright 2000 Paul Weatherstone - All Rights Reserved
Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
1 posted 2000-01-12 05:35 PM


Hey Walter I had those very same tremors yesterday.  Another in depth one  

 Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)



Bojopy
Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 391

2 posted 2000-01-12 10:25 PM


Deep and revealing of oneself.  I liked this one.  bojopy

 

"Write down what you say if what you say is not written down" (Bojopy)


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