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starboards
Member

since 1999-10-14

Posts 467
longwood, florida

0 posted 1999-12-18 11:20 AM

I'm so scared
please help me
Take this away
I no longer want it to be

Feeling my pain
you too would wish it away
i might sound depressed right now
but for my true emotions I cant say

You knew me for my personality
and for my great smile
but such memories of me
will fade in you after awhile.

***I'm not sure what i'm feeling right now, so i dont know if these are my actual emotions***

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"It would take an acrobat, I've already tried all that, I'm gonna let him fly"
-Dixie Chicks
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JD
Member

since 1999-11-05

Posts 61
N Prov

1 posted 1999-12-18 11:56 AM

This Poem was great keep up the good work

JD

Everything Dies

lostboy
Member

since 1999-11-21

Posts 275
New Hampshire, USA

2 posted 1999-12-18 11:58 AM

I know you're not sure what you're feeling at the moment but...you're expressing yourself, that's good. I'm listening and am surley not alone in that. Someone's going to appreciate that great smile, ya know!

starboards
Member

since 1999-10-14

Posts 467
longwood, florida

3 posted 1999-12-18 12:03 PM

Thanks lost...and JD...

starboards

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"It would take an acrobat, I've already tried all that, I'm gonna let him fly"
-Dixie Chicks
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Niemczak
Member

since 1999-12-15

Posts 51

4 posted 1999-12-18 02:03 PM

I can truly understand the feeling of this one. It seems to me that so far I have been reading poetry that is hitting close to home. I don't know if I like that feeling or not.

Skyfyre
Senior Member

since 1999-08-15

Posts 1906
Sitting in Michael's Lap

5 posted 1999-12-18 06:51 PM

How fickle is the human heart;
How flighty and how quick to stray --
'Tis better to keep safe thy soul
And live to love another day!

--Kess

You cannot choose the way of your death, but the path you choose will determine its own end.

starboards
Member

since 1999-10-14

Posts 467
longwood, florida

6 posted 1999-12-18 10:48 PM

great poem skyfyre..and thanks...but i'd have to disagree, even thought love does hurt, if someone goes through life w/out loving, they have never really lived, i'm just now realizing this...it was hard to believe at first

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"It would take an acrobat, I've already tried all that, I'm gonna let him fly"
-Dixie Chicks
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