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Walter Poe
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since 1999-10-13
Posts 787


0 posted 1999-12-17 06:24 AM


Their is a place
Where all creation rests
Where all are well
and all can tell

Up in sky flying by
with the swallows
With the Butterflys
Up on high

Where angels Stay
In their Earthly way
When on holiday
From heavons lair

A castle of clouds
Up in the air
Where Kings are born
And heroes are made

Where All are one
Under the waves
And all are loved
I a wonderful charade


 Pride of place in the human race goes to one without a trace,
of subtlety style ego or grace for this position, I wish to say, i would be proud as i am greater than any other face in the crowd

© Copyright 1999 Paul Weatherstone - All Rights Reserved
starboards
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since 1999-10-14
Posts 467
longwood, florida
1 posted 1999-12-17 09:05 AM


Poe--
  Where can I find this place?? You described it perfectly! Great job!!

ashley

Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
2 posted 1999-12-17 05:17 PM


Beautiful Walter, a glimpse of the evermore, loved it  

 What the inner voice says will NOT disappoint the hoping soul.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


JD
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since 1999-11-05
Posts 61
N Prov
3 posted 1999-12-17 10:37 PM


I think this poem was great



 Everything Dies



Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850
In the space between moments
4 posted 1999-12-18 12:22 PM


Beautifully done...I too would like to find this place.  

 *Krista Knutson*

~Only within the depths of the most ominous darkness can the beauty of light truly be understood~


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