Nights (A "T" inspiration)

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Nights (A "T" inspiration)

Deep Blue Me
Member

since 1999-11-04

Posts 396
By a big lake

0 posted 1999-11-13 09:53 AM

Asleep in a chair
My dream returns
Age is real
Days of rain
Nights of pleasure
Smoke floats lifeless
Obscures the faces
Streets filled with filth
Never seen, not known
Lashed to a cloud
Enduring the sunlight
Till dusk falls from the trees
And envelopes the shadows
Horizontal in the garden
Tulips enfold my form
And I pierce their softness
Stars dance crazily in the grass
Laughing with the joy I felt
When I was young and in love.

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And in the darkest depths of Mordor,
I met a girl so fair
But Gollum and the Evil One
Crept up and slipped away with her.
===Zep===

Systematic Decay
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........

1 posted 1999-11-13 11:04 AM

I really like this one....the last line gives it sort of a wistful twist.

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Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices.

JennyLee
Senior Member

since 1999-09-01

Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.

2 posted 1999-11-13 01:31 PM

And envelopes of shadows..I love this

Jenny

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Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual.

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

3 posted 1999-11-15 09:54 AM

Oh to dream this life away...good poem D.B.
There is no feeling I can relate to that of being 16 and in love.

Michael

Tammy
Member

since 1999-09-09

Posts 90

4 posted 1999-11-15 10:24 AM

DB,
I really like this one... Is the "T" the "T" that I'm thinking of that inspired this piece?

Deep Blue Me
Member

since 1999-11-04

Posts 396
By a big lake

5 posted 1999-11-15 02:29 PM

It is indeed, my dear. Loved that last one.

Sys-CT-Michael, Thanks for your words.

DB

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There's someone in my head,
But it's not me.
==P. Floyd==

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