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Deep Blue Me Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396By a big lake |
Surrounded by death wished for Dull eyes are struggling to see What form stalks, strikes to the core Great Dark One. It is he. Sharp serpentine tongue is lashing Tearing bedclothes away Cunning deep-coal eyes are flashing With fierce lust for sweet young prey He despoils them one by one His brutal hands do grope And plunges deep to gain a son Their souls bereft of hope Swollen underbelly slick with virgin blood Breasts lactating sweet red wine He thrusts, impales another flowered hood And makes them drink as swine He looses mightily into each And laughs above their screams When done with this, for another he'll reach Terror stabbing into dreams Then retreating back into Hell He waits for his borne brood When clanging bells sound a mother's death knell He cares not if she understood. ------------------ And in the darkest depths of Mordor, I met a girl so fair But Gollum and the Evil One Crept up and slipped away with her. ===Zep=== |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
Wow.....what a description of rape.....wonderful, absolutely wonderful...... ------------------ Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices. |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
This piece is Dark and awesome!! Jenny Lee  Way to go DB!! ------------------ Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
DB I enjoyed the vivid imagery. Jim would like this one I'm sure ------------------ Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing... ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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FreeByrd Member
since 1999-11-03
Posts 267 |
Excellent...... The visual was great. IMAX has got nothin on you. -RS |
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Yoin Junior Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 29 |
a great dark piece DB! Yoin |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Wow...this poem is a "Great Dark One", itself. Wonderful, D.B. Michael |
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Tammy Member
since 1999-09-09
Posts 90 |
DB, This one is a very powerful and dark piece.... I like this one.. T. [This message has been edited by Tammy (edited 11-15-1999).] |
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Deep Blue Me Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396By a big lake |
Didn't think I had it in me, did ya? Thought ol' DB was just a cream puff, huh? Well I am, I don't know where this came from. LOL It hit me hard and fast the other day. Thanks for reading me. DB ------------------ There's someone in my head, But it's not me. ==P. Floyd== |
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