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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Somewhere deep inside, her screams are never ending She screams and screams While my face has no resemblence My mouth close and burning, forcing back an echo to her screams Like a deep, damp tomb... She longs to be free of it Somewhere deep inside, the bitter reality sets in and she falls to the floor Amongst the deep black She cries until breath is gone Somewhere deep inside, she's shivering, she's sobbing, she's burrowed in a dark corner Never willing to come out, not wanting to hide |
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D.B. Whyte Member
since 1999-10-27
Posts 94Crest Hill, IL, USA |
She longs to be free of it, and so do I. Nice imagery, DE! D.B./slomovingvehicle ------------------ Inevitably asking the impossible, "Grasp the imponderable, love the unloveable, be true to your betrayers." |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Somewhere deep inside the bitter reality sets in... She falls to the floor Amongst the deep black She cries until breath is gone... Bitter reality is sometimes more than I can bear. You have done well with this piece. Jenny |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Well done. ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
I hope she finds strength to stand again. Michael |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
She always will. |
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