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Susan
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walking the surreal

0 posted 2004-05-13 09:20 PM



Daydreams

Whispered dreams
Like Fairy wings
Drift along on summer breezes
Alighting upon shimmering blossoms
Of endless possibilities
Their glistening promises
Radiant in the late afternoon sun

I reach a hand
I pick a petal
Magic rests upon my palm
Eyes closed, I see the dream
Then blow a kiss
The petal drifts
Dancing in time to Evening’s song

Fly away sweet heart’s desire
Caught upon the winds of time
Cross the expanse of common notion
Sail into the ocean of imagination
And come to moor in safe harbor
In the welcoming hands of true existence
The fruition of daydreams come true

S.A.T.

Susan

The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart.

© Copyright 2004 s.a.t. - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2004-05-13 09:25 PM


Beautiful...incredibly beautiful.
Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

muted
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Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving
2 posted 2004-05-13 09:30 PM


very nice
we are on same wavelength today loved this

inkedgoddess
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3 posted 2004-05-13 09:51 PM


im floating.............
on the breeze of your lovely words............

Opeth
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The Ravines
4 posted 2004-05-13 10:26 PM


I felt that I was floating in a breeze while reading this... well done!
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5 posted 2004-05-13 10:30 PM


Susan~
I love the wistfulness of this~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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IcyFlamez89
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6 posted 2004-05-13 10:36 PM


I really enjoyed this as well. I was caught and lifted by each word.
iliana
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7 posted 2004-05-14 12:44 PM


Susan, this was one daydream that became a momentary reality for me with your wonderful imagery and writing.  Thanks!  
passing shadows
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displaced
8 posted 2004-05-14 02:36 AM


softly beautiful
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