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Destinys_Fallen_Angel
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0 posted 2004-05-06 03:22 AM



I lay here next to you, in the same bed
Yet we're miles apart, so far away
I'm thinking of what we've shared, yet you don't care

I've lived my life for you, given all I could
Yet it doesn't seem like it's enough
I'm trying to reach out, but all we do is fight and shout

I can't live like this, all alone, even when your there
Yet I'm not strong enough to walk away
I'm in love with you, even when you hurt me

I'm going crazy from the silence
Yet I can't seem to break the walls down
I've tried all I can, done what I can, I can't do anymore
Scared and alone
Lost and miserable
Hurt and abandoned
Abused and torn
Desolate and miserable
My heart aches, it's torn in two
I need you to be there for me
But your not here for me

My tears fall, hidden from all
I want to feel your arms holding me
But you don't touch me anymore

I love you baby,
But I can't live like this
Anymore

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2004-05-06 03:30 AM


oh Destiny...this is painful...I know, I've been there

Welcome to Passions. I hope you find healing and comfort here.

garysgirl
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2 posted 2004-05-06 03:31 AM


Destiny, this is a beautiful poem......sad,
yet beautiful. I look forward to reading more of your work.
And, welcome back to Passions.
Hugs,  
Ethel

Destinys_Fallen_Angel
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3 posted 2004-05-06 03:32 AM


THank you both for your feed back, i'm happy to say though that things between me and my husband have been worked out..that was a poem i wrote when he and split up for a time being

Destiny

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Lost Awhile
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4 posted 2004-05-06 04:11 AM


Speechless!
I know exactly how you felt, except being the man I am on the other side. I am so pleased that things have worked out for you. It gives me a litle hope. xx

quatro
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since 2003-04-29
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Galveston, Texas
5 posted 2004-05-06 03:28 PM


DFA,

I have been in your shoes before and I know that it's a painful trip.  I'm happy to hear that this is in the past.

Our life's changes are what brings about emotions that sometimes we don't know how to deal with and it's fortunate that we are able to express them on paper to help releive ourselves of the pain and in the process...help another.  That's where poets come from.

Keep writing...from the heart.

quatro

iliana
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6 posted 2004-05-06 05:41 PM


Welcome to PIP!  Your poem brought back memories.  I'll be watching for more.  Best of luck.  
Enchantress
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7 posted 2004-05-06 05:56 PM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!
Glad to hear things have turned around for you.
I look forward to seeing  more of your work.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ Lost in you, I found myself. ~

JamesMichael
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8 posted 2004-05-07 12:45 PM


Who would want to...James
Destinys_Fallen_Angel
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9 posted 2004-05-07 12:47 PM


Thank you all for your feed back i appreciate it...

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10 posted 2004-05-08 10:34 AM



A painful write, its good to know that things have worked out for you
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