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Open Poetry #32

Someone Said

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2004-05-07 07:36 PM

Someone Said (past)

She left me
and I didn't
know what to do.

Then someone said
"Why do you want
to be with a woman
that doesn't want
to be with you?"

"But she told me
she loves me."
I quickly replied.
Then someone said,
"Do her actions
match the words
that she said,
if not she
told a lie."

"Enough said",
I replied.

JamesLee
May08
2004
Words from
past history.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2004-05-07 07:41 PM

Wow...I'm glad that's in your past James.
Good write.
Hugs~

~ Trace my body with your words,
in doing so, you touch my heart ~

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2004-05-07 07:48 PM

True and clear.
Never cling too much to those who walk away ... What has been, has been.
Love, Margherita

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2004-05-08 06:23 AM

ouch...but true

Goldenrose
Member Elite

since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

4 posted 2004-05-08 06:32 AM

So true james....

May i draw your atention to my dday post on announcements and links....

Thank you for your poem....

Goldenrose.

''There is no need for temples, no need for complicated Philosophies.
My brain and my heart are my temples; my philosophy is kindness''- Dalai Lama

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

5 posted 2004-05-08 09:12 AM

Concise and powerful. Well done James!

believe in what your heart feels...

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