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Open Poetry #32
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MexicoCityBlues
Junior Member
since 2004-01-04
Posts 48
The Point of Know Return
0 posted 2004-05-05 12:33 PM


We could see you
In the rain
With hunger brewing
Deep down
You
Too.

Beautiful demon,
I can see your scars
But that star
In your gut…
Is it new?
No
It’s been there.
I knew it.

Love me.
Okay.

Burn me.
Okay.

You’ll never burn
With me.

"The story of life is quicker than the wink of an eye. The story of love is Hello and Goodbye. Until we meet again..." -Jimi Hendrix
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Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348
Florida
1 posted 2004-05-05 08:19 AM

"Beautiful demon,
I can see your scars"

Which came first?  The scars or the demon?

I enjoyed...

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~
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