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LeeJ
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0 posted 2004-05-04 10:18 AM


Sightseeing through the “meal of the day”
There is something to absorb from the menu
Footsteps of St. Bernadette, pray
for the sick
Locating lost objects, we embrace surroundings

Countless onlookers scan the edge
Avoiding waste whenever possible!
Gathering atoms and things in care
Be-dazzled by a brighter side

Floating on gravity of destruction
We come face to face with our sphere
And flowers decorating our emancipation
Selling religious dialogue of autonomy

For what lies beneath us all…?

Some other kind of depth we must foster
Relieving us of the need for eye wear
In Paris, Cairo, or the USA, we’re all buying power
To a worldwide network…waiting the all inclusive


© Copyright 2004 Lee J. - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2004-05-04 11:36 AM


LeeJ
Good question, enjoyed. Good morning sweet.

Gentle Spirit
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2 posted 2004-05-04 11:43 AM


lovely...
Annie Shadow
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since 2004-05-02
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Drifting
3 posted 2004-05-04 12:37 PM


Wow, very thought provoking writing..I wish I would have thought of something this profound.  Great Job!!!
Smiles

passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2004-05-04 12:41 PM


*sigh* yeah...dang...what a write
JL
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5 posted 2004-05-06 03:14 PM


So true and to the point!  Is there really an answer?

Enjoyed
JL

She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”


iliana
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6 posted 2004-05-06 05:47 PM


Always, Lee, you get me thinking!  Great write!  
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