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Time of my Life
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Time of my Life |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside 
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~*~ Days slip away,over the years in between when I reigned as queen and you were my king, my favorite chapter, in that time of my life. How I loved you so for all the right reasons and the precious seeds you planted. I remember you as an impossible dream too good to be true. We were truly blessed before we drew swords, taking individual stands wielding idle threats, submitting to the pain, placing the blame. Leaving scars, shedding tears that will last foever, doesn't change anything not now, not ever. But for you and I, I hope someday we will come away and make our peace. Hidden in a valley beside an open stream, another love will take our place where we will find our dreams, and make them last. ~*~ |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
You have a special way of speaking directly to the open heart there Bluesy... TD |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi Lori...it's good to see you! But for you and I, I hope someday we will come away and make our peace. This is so hard to do...but makes life so much easier if you can.  |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
...a nice thought, well stated. Thank you for sgaring it. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
TD, Martie and icebox, thank you. I'm pretty miserable company these days, but writing helps to keep the blues at bay. Hugs to you all~ |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
I hope you find that place. Even if you're the only one that makes it there. Namaste |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Good expression -- been there. The only peace I've is individual, not mutual. But, that has been enough. |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Dear Bluesy, The coming and going of love is so very hard to understand but I'm at a disadvantage because it only came once to me - in such a long life too. What is it supposed to teach us I wonder and will the lesson ever be worthwhile? |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh lady....you know I feel ya |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
But for you and I, I hope someday we will come away and make our peace. Hope is always a good thing. Ms BluesWhat are you my god? You touch me like you are my god |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Sad write with sparks of hope, touching read. There are endings and beginnings. Now is the time of new beginnings, if you let them happen ... Bluesy queen, you are meant to reign! Love and hugs. Margherita  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
The sincerety of this write is its true gift..and the key to healing, to moving forward. Good to see you back in the blue pages Lori-girl.  The ink bleeds through cuz you're paper thin |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
A heartfelt write. Eloquently expressed emotions. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Lori~ sorry to see this ache in you.....I understand though... wishing you more hope then ever right now....be well ....   ~~**~~ |
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Annie Shadow Junior Member
since 2004-05-02
Posts 27Drifting |
This was simply awesome. I loved the emotion and gentle wisdom sprinkled in your words. Great job. |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
Blue, Did you write this poem for me?  I could of said the same exact thing. This... I most definitely related to... enjoyed! |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
 i'm more than with you on this one luv ya blondielocks |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
as always a wonderful write of your deepest feelings... I know where you are coming from...and I am there with you...until later M |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
But for you and I, I hope someday we will come away and make our peace. I wish this for you! *S* But sometimes it has to be enough to find that peace ourselves and wish them well. *S* Beautiful, poignant write! *S* |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
"We were truly blessed before we drew swords, taking individual stands wielding idle threats, submitting to the pain, placing the blame." Ya know Bluesy, ya really were blessed. Ya could've ended up with a bunch of cats instead of kids. Thought ya might miss my zoo humor...  |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Bluesey Here it is, what poets do best... A display of words, that stir emotions, Of love and despair ... The tuning of heart strings, Played in sad minor keys. And then, at the end of the song, An incline of spirits That declined in the much that was lost In their predecessors... Hope enters in the last groups Of words, bringing a little light To the dark rooms of the others. ---------ice ><> |
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