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Open Poetry #32
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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
0 posted 2004-04-29 01:05 AM

Taking Me


As I watch you
walking around the corner
I realize how
deeply I care for you.
You look like an angel.
Watching you makes me believe
that angels are true.
And that beautiful smile
upon you lovely face.
That smile is taking me
to a world of caring and grace.


JamesLee
April26
2004
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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
1 posted 2004-04-29 08:15 AM

How tender!
Love, Margherita
LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
2 posted 2004-04-29 08:27 AM

love doesn't always complete us, but it certainly does lay an attribute on our quality of life...I liked the way you notice how she makes you want to be...
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2004-05-01 12:26 PM

Thank you Margherita and Lee J for the nice responses...James
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