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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2004-04-17 07:54 AM


Genie
am I
sparking this
snap o'finger
smack of lips
drifting
through
an old keyhole
laughing
knowing
that this is
what it was
in "used-to-be"
bulbs in burst
of the marquee
begging
to begin again
leaving prints
of fingers rent
hedging
movement
through the glove
relent
a middle finger
blown
by the glossy lips
-goodbye-

a smile
a prancing
in the breath
dancing
of me
wishing less
and more--
that I could stay...
again
laughing at the death,
my friend
bidding welcome
at the door
cradling
these eyes of glass...

I'm a genie's circumstance--
reconciling whims.


© Copyright 2004 serenity blaze - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2004-04-17 07:59 AM


serenity,
You do have a way of reconciling. Enjoyed

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

2 posted 2004-04-17 08:05 AM


Incredible you are Gorgeous..

Mxx

Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder.
(by Virginia Woolf)

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

3 posted 2004-04-17 10:39 AM


Genie
am I
sparking this
snap o'finger
smack of lips
drifting
through
an old keyhole
laughing
knowing
that this is
what it was
in "used-to-be"
bulbs in burst
of the marquee
begging
to begin again
leaving prints
of fingers rent
hedging
movement
through the glove
relent
a middle finger
blown
by the glossy lips
-goodbye-

==============================


*smiling at you*
theres so much here to see between the lines...I do so love the way your poetic mind works....
love the imagery in this Sen...tis like watching an old fave movie late at night.


leaving prints
of fingers rent


yer so kewl!

... and it's you ... you ... you ... you ...
the light changes when you're in the room.

M.B.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
4 posted 2004-04-17 01:00 PM


cool write K
Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
5 posted 2004-04-17 01:01 PM


You are amazing!
Did I say that before?
...ok..just said it again!
Love ya lady~

To have lived the dream of a love so true...
   is to have seen a glimpse of heaven.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
6 posted 2004-04-17 05:17 PM


It is refreshing to me how you see things for what they are!

From the floor!!  Yes!!!
Very cool slant, Ms. Serenity~  

Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
7 posted 2004-04-17 06:59 PM


drifting
through
an old keyhole
laughing
knowing

~*~

grinning
winking at you
knowing


Grover
Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada
8 posted 2004-04-17 07:05 PM


Truly, a talented writer!
garysgirl
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since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237
Florida, USA
9 posted 2004-04-17 08:01 PM


SereneOne, my friend, your writing never
ceases to amaze me......just like you.
Love ya, lady
hugs,
Ethel

MGROVES
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california
10 posted 2004-04-17 08:08 PM


you are truly talented


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