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swatcatpettus
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since 2004-04-12
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0 posted 2004-04-13 12:08 PM


The fields overswept with the blood and the corpses,
of those who fought for the minds and the voices,
of the plain man,
the strange man,
the outcast,
and the rebel,
all the minds that could have made the eternal balance level,

constantly thethered to this daymare,
this nightmare,
the forbidding tought of living in a world governed by fear,
no one knows all the twisted problems that i face,
i just need a guide, to direct me out of this place...


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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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1 posted 2004-04-13 02:39 AM


sounds uncomfortable...hope you find the guide
ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
2 posted 2004-04-13 10:17 AM


There is always light at the end of that tunnel...walk towards the light...
Great write.
TD

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